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		<title>2012 &#8211; A Year of Big Goals</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2012 05:53:17 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JA Marlow</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>2011 Business Plan in Review</p> <p>Start up publishing company</p> <p>Check! Doing it was easy. Finding a name for the publishing company was hard. It took almost two months of thinking, putting up ideas on a dry-erase board, and researching domain names before I settled on &#8220;Star Catcher Publishing.&#8221;</p> <p>Set up Distribution and Retailer Accounts</p> <p>Again, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="font-size: medium;"><strong>2011 Business Plan in Review</strong></span></p>
<p><strong><span style="font-size: small;">Start up publishing company</span></strong></p>
<p>Check! Doing it was easy. Finding a name for the publishing company was hard. It took almost two months of thinking, putting up ideas on a dry-erase board, and researching domain names before I settled on &#8220;Star Catcher Publishing.&#8221;</p>
<p><strong>Set up Distribution and Retailer Accounts</strong></p>
<p>Again, rather easy and straight-forward. This took maybe an hour.</p>
<p><strong>Publishing Goals</strong></p>
<p>Then came the plan of what projects to finish and publish. This was a short list of three novellas and one novel. Good news is that I achieved this goal.</p>
<p>The better news is that I also achieved the second-year goal, and most of the third and fourth. This was good for business, no question, but it made me thing about what the goals should be going into 2012.</p>
<p><span style="font-size: medium;"><strong>New Types of Goals</strong></span></p>
<p>The one thing I&#8217;ve learned this past year is the need to be flexible in the writing business. Sometimes one or another project is working better. Sometimes another project needs to be brought forward because of increased interest in a sub-genre. Sometimes a cover is ready for one but not another.</p>
<p>I kept this in mind in deciding the goals for 2012.</p>
<p><span style="font-size: medium;"><strong>2012 Writing Plan</strong></span></p>
<p><strong>2012 Business plan</strong></p>
<p><strong>Writing Goals:</strong><br />
500,000 new words<br />
250,000 revision words</p>
<p><strong>Publication Goals:</strong><br />
12 new releases in 2012.<br />
Get out paperback versions of the novels.</p>
<p>Nice and simple. I did not define any of the goals down to the point of naming exact books or series. I did not decide it would be so many novels, novellas, novelettes, and short stories.</p>
<p>Nope. I kept it at overall word count for both new words and revision words. Doing it this way I can keep going without guilt. Work on the projects that need to be worked on. Bring projects forward in the queue if I think they need to be. Push back books that are having problems.</p>
<p>At the same time, I&#8217;m also stretching myself. I&#8217;ve never tried 500,000 new words in a year. For the second half of 2011 I was able to write 300,000 with the help of NaNoWriMo, so I have high hopes of achieving the goal. Even if I don&#8217;t make it, I&#8217;m sure to come out of 2012 with a heck of a lot of new words!</p>
<p>I&#8217;m not as fast at revision, so I&#8217;m working towards a lower goal on that with the hopes of building up so that the new words and revision words will eventually be the same each year. In 2011 I&#8217;ve taken great strides in it, which is what happens when you practice something a lot. Here&#8217;s to 2012 being even better! :clink:</p>
<p>2012 promises to be a year of stretching the writing wings, trying new things, continuing to learn to be flexible, and most of all, telling ever more stories. I can&#8217;t wait!</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">____________________</p>
<p>J.A. Marlow</p>
<p><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B005IZJURG/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;tag=starcatcpubl-20&amp;amp;linkCode=as2&amp;amp;camp=217145&amp;amp;creative=399373&amp;amp;creativeASIN=B005IZJURG"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-666" title="Coffee Cup Dreams" src="http://jamarlow.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/CCD_350H.jpg" alt="" width="219" height="350" /></a></p>
<p><em><strong><span style="font-size: medium;">Coffee Cup Dreams</span></strong></em></p>
<p><strong><em>She wasn&#8217;t supposed to wake up when dead…</em></strong></p>
<p><em>During what should have been a simple operation, Tish Douglas died. And yet, she also awoke… in what the doctors called a &#8216;psi event.&#8217;</em></p>
<p><em>Despite having no memory of the incident, it means she&#8217;s required to go on a life-time course of debilitating drugs designed to reign in her supposedly new psi gifts. She&#8217;s left with the option of existing on Earth in a drug-haze, or leave the planet.</em></p>
<p><em>When an opportunity for a good paying job on a space station known as Redpoint One is offered, she jumps at the chance. Even though she doesn&#8217;t have any experience as a &#8216;maintenance engineer.&#8217; Even though the station sits in the middle of nowhere, a still-operating construct of a long-gone alien species.</em></p>
<p><em>Between pirate attacks, intelligent repair robots, and maintenance emergencies, Tish must find a place for herself.</em></p>
<p><em>All complicated by a growing attraction to the one person on the station she can&#8217;t have: boss Arthur Getty.</em></p>
<p><em>A stand-alone 48400 word, 193 page (approximate), science fiction romance novel.</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B005IZJURG/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=starcatcpubl-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=217145&amp;creative=399373&amp;creativeASIN=B005IZJURG" target="_blank">Amazon</a> | <a href="http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/coffee-cup-dreams-ja-marlow/1105100468" target="_blank">Barnes &amp; Noble </a>|<a href="http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/83868?ref=StarCatcherPublishing" target="_blank"> Smashwords</a></p>
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		<title>Revision Started on Book 3 of the Salmon Run Series</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 31 May 2011 04:28:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JA Marlow</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Today I started revision on Book 3 of the Salmon Run series. The book needs a bit of work, but I was pleasantly surprised during a recent read-through that it&#8217;s not as rough as I originally thought it was.</p> <p>A few tweaks, fully develop the ideas already present in the first draft, and it should [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today I started revision on Book 3 of the Salmon Run series. The book needs a bit of work, but I was pleasantly surprised during a recent read-through that it&#8217;s not as rough as I originally thought it was.</p>
<p>A few tweaks, fully develop the ideas already present in the first draft, and it should be fine. I&#8217;m aiming to have the revision finished in 6 weeks at which point I will hand it off to my two editors. Estimate goal for handing it off to the editors: July 10th. If I manage to finish it a bit earlier, even better!</p>
<p>One of the things I want to do is increase the wordcount. The first draft sits at 25500. I would like to bring it up to around 35,000 which is around where the other two books sit (37800 for <a href="http://www.starcatcherpub.com/archives/147">Night of the Aurora</a> and 35100 for <a href="http://www.starcatcherpub.com/archives/191">Alien Winter</a>). Considering that I need to flesh out the subplots and I added four scenes to the revision-outline, I should make it.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m so excited about the prospect of having 3 books in the series released. For me, that&#8217;s a milestone. The characters are really developing, I&#8217;m enjoying the town of Salmon Run and the fun with the aliens. Plus, it looks great in the book listings.</p>
<p>It has me rethinking this upcoming <a href="http://nanowrimo.com" target="_blank">National Novel Writing Month</a>. I originally planned to write a new trilogy, possibly writing the first drafts of all three in one month. However, I still have a lot of outlining to do on that series. Writing out the next three books of the Salmon Run series might make more sense, and would be a lot of fun.</p>
<p>I want to see what the characters will be up to next, too!</p>
<p>Then would come figuring out the cover. Hmmm. I&#8217;ll have to chew on that as I&#8217;m revising.</p>
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		<title>Indie Benefit: Flexibility</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Feb 2011 22:00:59 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JA Marlow</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;…in the world nothing can be said to be certain except death and taxes.&#8221; – Benjamin Franklin</p> <p>I think that phrase needs to add, &#8220;and uncertainty.&#8221;</p> <p>Life changes fast, often broad-siding us from unexpected directions. January has been a month filled with events. I won&#8217;t go into the details, but suffice to say that I&#8217;m [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong><em>&#8220;…in the world nothing can be said to be certain except death and taxes.&#8221; – Benjamin Franklin</em></strong></p>
<p>I think that phrase needs to add, &#8220;and uncertainty.&#8221;</p>
<p>Life changes fast, often broad-siding us from unexpected directions. January has been a month filled with events. I won&#8217;t go into the details, but suffice to say that I&#8217;m now a month behind on almost everything because of it.</p>
<p>And it brought to mind another benefit of going the Indie route: Flexibility.</p>
<p>My household had a bad month, including me personally. Choosing to go Indie meant that I could give all my attention to those events without worry of losing a contract or angering an editor. Or all the other fall-out that can occur.</p>
<p>Several Indie authors I&#8217;ve been following have mentioned that they try not to announce hard and fast release dates because of this sort of thing. It&#8217;s one reason I chose not to announce release dates on my first work. Instead, I gave a ball-park estimated time of year. I&#8217;ll miss the very first part of that estimation, but perhaps I can hit the latter part.</p>
<p>What this means is that &#8220;Night of the Aurora&#8221;, the first book in the Salmon Run series is going to be delayed at least into March. After losing January, there&#8217;s no other option. Family and health had to come first.</p>
<p>Life happens. I like having the flexibility to roll with it.</p>
<p>The good news is that in February I&#8217;ll have a couple novelettes ready to go and perhaps another short story. The novel &#8220;Into the Forest Shadows&#8221; is also almost ready.</p>
<p>Spring is shaping up to be an interesting release time.</p>
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		<title>Revision Type-In Finished!</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Jun 2010 04:58:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JA Marlow</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Into the Forest Shadows</p> <p>On a world of valuable giant trees and intelligent animals, a red-cloaked headstrong teen struggles to save her family from a planetary conspiracy awaiting her at Grandmother&#8217;s house.</p> <p>The above 2009 NaNoWriMo book was the novel I used to go through Holly Lisle&#8217;s &#8220;How to Revise Your Novel&#8221; class. The class [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>Into the Forest Shadows</strong></p>
<p>On a world of valuable giant trees and intelligent animals, a red-cloaked headstrong teen struggles to save her family from a planetary conspiracy awaiting her at Grandmother&#8217;s house.</p>
<p>The above 2009 NaNoWriMo book was the novel I used to go through Holly Lisle&#8217;s &#8220;<a href="http://howtoreviseyournovel.com/?rid=91">How to Revise Your Novel</a>&#8221; class. The class started on December 1st of 2009 and finished in April. Only now have I finished one of the final stages, and that was to type in all the changes I marked up on the printed-out manuscript. </p>
<p>The original first draft: 81877 words</p>
<p>Revised draft: 79855 words</p>
<p>Considering I had several new scenes and no cut scenes, I&#8217;m surprised the word count didn&#8217;t go up. But, there you go. I was snipping a word here and a sentence there. Every so often a portion of a page. It all added up.</p>
<p>Hehe, or deleted up. </p>
<p>Whew, what a lot of work, but definitely worth it! I&#8217;m really happy with the way the story came out. Now to format it into chapters and prepare it for the beta-readers, who will then rip it to shreds. <img src='http://jamarlow.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':D' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Goal Setting For Writers &#8211; Do YOU Have one?</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Apr 2010 13:52:41 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JA Marlow</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Bob Mayer Posted &#8220;Goal Setting For Writers&#8221; at Genreality yesterday. This year of writing for me has been all about goals. Making them, working towards them and achieving them. Here soon I&#8217;m going to take a first look at how I compare to the 5 Year Plan I posted a while back. See where I&#8217;m [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Bob Mayer Posted <a href="http://www.genreality.net/goal-setting-for-writers">&#8220;Goal Setting For Writers&#8221;</a> at Genreality yesterday. This year of writing for me has been all about goals. Making them, working towards them and achieving them. Here soon I&#8217;m going to take a first look at how I compare to the <a href="http://jamarlow.com/2010/01/a-5-year-writing-business-plan/">5 Year Plan</a> I posted a while back. See where I&#8217;m at towards achieving it.</p>
<p>Bob talks a little bit more about the specific high-level goals writers should be setting for themselves. I&#8217;ll have to mull it over to see if my 5 year plan could use a bit more of that, or be adjusted a bit. </p>
<p>Anyone else have new or revised writing goals?</p>
<p>But, for now, I need a cup of tea and another hour of revision completed today! I have a goal to achieve!</p>
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		<title>Survived March!</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Apr 2010 14:13:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JA Marlow</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Surviving a month doesn&#8217;t sound like much, but it is when you&#8217;ve been sick two months in a row. I was already run-down from being sick at the beginning of February, and then I caught the bad cold bug that&#8217;s been going around. That wiped me out! Unable to go to work for a week, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Surviving a month doesn&#8217;t sound like much, but it is when you&#8217;ve been sick two months in a row. I was already run-down from being sick at the beginning of February, and then I caught the bad cold bug that&#8217;s been going around. That wiped me out! Unable to go to work for a week, and then it lingered.</p>
<p>And lingered.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s official, I&#8217;m sick and tired of coughing!</p>
<p>Only now is the coughing starting to lighten up. You know, with a cold like this, who needs the flu!?!?!</p>
<p>Okay, not quite true. The worst flu I&#8217;ve ever had was last November, and that one WAS worse than this cold. But the regular flu? Nah, this cold was worse.</p>
<p>Anyway, despite everything I did manage to finish <a href="http://www.nanoedmo.net/xoops2/">National Novel Editing Month</a> in March. The goal was to hit 50 hours. Somehow, and I&#8217;m not sure how, I managed to win with 94 hours. I&#8217;m still trying to figure out how I did that, but the month is lost in a haze of coughing.</p>
<p>Now in healing mode. Even more homemade soups with lots of veggies, an apple at every lunch, a &#8216;protein drink&#8217; every morning (Not really what it is, but what we call it. Lots of stuff we mix into it). It&#8217;s going to take some time to build up again, but it all happens in little steps. </p>
<p>I hope your March went better!</p>
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		<title>Surviving the Carnage of a Hard Crit</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Mar 2010 14:31:14 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JA Marlow</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s hard to develop the thick skin necessary to accept crits. But then, writing is a difficult business to be in and a tough skin is essential. That said, when you receive a long and detailed crit that also includes negative responses, let yourself go through the steps of &#8216;mourning&#8217; that your work isn&#8217;t perfect. [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s hard to develop the thick skin necessary to accept crits. But then, writing is a difficult business to be in and a tough skin is essential. That said, when you receive a long and detailed crit that also includes negative responses, let yourself go through the steps of &#8216;mourning&#8217; that your work isn&#8217;t perfect. Even though your mind might acknowledge that it isn&#8217;t perfect (and that&#8217;s why you solicited for crits) your heart is another matter. You have to train yourself how to deal with it, and each writer will be different on that.</p>
<p>And as someone who just received a big long crit with many bad points in a story pointed out, here is what I did, in hopes it helps:</p>
<p>First, realize this is YOUR story. You know what you wanted it to be, the story you wanted to tell. Remind yourself of that first before looking at the crits. If you happened to write down your theme or your &#8216;hook&#8217;, take the time to read it. (I did this, and it was a very good thing. See below)</p>
<p>Then go at that crit in one massive read-through, but do it with a pen and paper next to you. If you don&#8217;t agree with something, keep moving. Put it out of your mind. It doesn&#8217;t matter anymore.</p>
<p>However, if you find something that you think might have a little bit or a lot of merit, write it down on that piece of paper in your own words. When you write it down make a note of the area in the story to find the problem to help you track it down later.</p>
<p>Remember to compare the crits with the theme and story you want to write. If the suggestions take the story in a different direction, ignore them, even if the suggestions are good. Filling the work with a bunch of themes and unconnected ideas will only make it worse, not better.</p>
<p>Do the above until you are done with what was said in the crit. Then put the crit away. Don&#8217;t look at it for a while.</p>
<p>What you will have left is the piece of paper where you wrote down your notes. Because it&#8217;s in your handwriting and in your own words, your mind and heart won&#8217;t view it as if another strange person is trying to infiltrating your writing. The notes are now YOURS. </p>
<p>This is a little bit of a mind-game. By doing this you won&#8217;t be opening up the crit continually, and possibly getting yourself upset with too much negativity or constantly seeing things you don&#8217;t agree with. You are giving yourself distance from the crit while still moving forward with advice that could possibly make your work stronger.</p>
<p>But, it also has a practical purpose. You&#8217;ve now condensed out of the crit only the things that you agree (or somewhat agree) with. You can focus only on them. You don&#8217;t have the work of looking through a long crit to find the little bit you need out of all the things mentioned there. You have a condensed to-do list that you can condense down further or cross out as you finish the points or decide you don&#8217;t agree after all.</p>
<p>As I mentioned previously, I received a difficult crit. The above steps made it much easier to deal with, especially reviewing the theme and story hook. Going through the crit all at once made me realize the critter was giving suggestions to turn the story into a novel. The story wasn&#8217;t a novel, and I didn&#8217;t want it to be. With that realization, I was better able to sort through the advice and use details here and there to help improve the story without allowing the short story to become more than I wanted it to be.</p>
<p>Every critiquer comes to the story with their own slant, their own preferences, likes and dislikes, wants and needs. Those wants and needs may not coincide with you or the story you want to tell.</p>
<p>Be flexible while reading the critique and see it objectively. But also be strong enough to say &#8216;no&#8217; if it conflicts with what you want the story to be. Just because the advice is given doesn&#8217;t mean it must be followed.</p>
<p>Never forget this is your work, your words. Only you know where you want it to go, what it should be when it is polished and finished. </p>
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		<title>Free NaNoEdMo Revision Time Tracking Spreadsheet Available</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Mar 2010 00:15:07 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JA Marlow</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>The spreadsheet tracks hours for &#8220;National Novel Editing Month&#8221;, where the goal is to revise/edit for 50 hours in 31 days. It can be adapted and used for other months, as well, for anyone who wants to use it. I used as a base the spreadsheet that was offered last year, I rearranged and added [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The spreadsheet tracks hours for <a href="http://www.nanoedmo.net">&#8220;National Novel Editing Month&#8221;</a>, where the goal is to revise/edit for 50 hours in 31 days. It can be adapted and used for other months, as well, for anyone who wants to use it. I used as a base the spreadsheet that was offered last year, I rearranged and added a few things. It&#8217;s a GoogleDoc spreadsheet, however, you do not have to have a Google account to access it.</p>
<p>If you have GoogleDoc yourself, you can &#8220;Save As&#8221; to save a copy into your own account.</p>
<p>For anyone else, you can &#8220;Download As&#8221; (Export) this out into Excel or an Open Office document (as well as others).</p>
<p><a href="https://spreadsheets.google.com/ccc?key=0AutUy69naTOidFdKWUwtSDN4ZkFQMk9BSnZqTTFUdlE&#038;hl=en">Nanoedmo Time Tracking 2010</a></p>
<p>Enjoy!</p>
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